Thursday, September 11, 2014

Final Mock Article

Alright you guys, this is my final mock article for class, and it's not nearly as awful as my first round with the dinos, I promise.



4 comments:

  1. Really like your color coordination in this piece, as well as the use of capital letters at the start of each paragraph! Just a minor thing--there's no quotes around your quotation! Besides that, a wonderful job!

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  2. I think yours is my favorite! First of all, I don't think anyone else made the first letter of each paragraph bigger, including myself. You used a wonderful color palette that brightens the page. Because the subject is plants, the whole thing looks airy and fresh which is cool. Good job.

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  3. I like the font choice and the use of color in the first letter of each paragraph. All the colors are very cool and give the piece a soft and comforting feeling. Well done!

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  4. This is a beautiful article Liz! I like how your font color choices match the color of your background picture, and how you made the first letter of each paragraph larger and a different color - nice touch! I also think the text wrapped around the circular picture looks really nice. I really have no suggestions for you. Great job!

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